by body_artist
The plot was unexciting. The writing was equally lack-lustre.
And I wonder why would you refer Julie as 'the woman' in certain instance? It didn't jive at all.
Sorry, didn't work for me at all.
Well, I thought this was a very hot and very well-written story. Now I will go read some of your others. Keep up the excellent work.
A rather unique story. I don't think we see a lot of these stories..... do we? Still, like the other person, I found your referring to Julie as 'the woman' somewhat jarring at times.
Other than that, well done.
Hot it was of course!
The element of mystery is maintained till the end,
Leaving things open for sequels...
I couldn't take my eyes from the screen the whole time. Please make another chapter when Julie finally meets the "unseen voice".