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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
willing suspension of disbelief

Hard to come by with lines like this:

"Mua tried to remember whether she had ever experienced anything like this"

Come on now! Unless she had early onset Alsheimer's it would have been burnt into her brain.

smysecretsmysecretover 16 years agoAuthor
Good point

Grin! The comment is fair. I have changed the story to remove any trace of memory loss. Anyone else want to improve the story?

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