by TheDarkCloud
Forget that other comment, this story is freaking HOT!!! Cant wait for the next chapter. Hope its soon.
You wasted you time writing this and I wasted my time reating this. Please don't give up your day job, because you will never make it with this Trash.
Like the story, I hope you have Denise make the husband knock up his sister. She can get her Sister in Law to put her husband in a chastity belt until she is pregnant leaving the key with Denise. She should have the Mother and sister in Law tattooed and peirced maybe have them turn a few tricks. I hope you explain how and when Denise got control.
You're one of my favourite writers here and I find this right up to your normal high standards. I love this genre. Please continue.