by TheDarkCloud
You're one of my favourite writers here and I find this right up to your normal high standards. I love this genre. Please continue.
Like the story, I hope you have Denise make the husband knock up his sister. She can get her Sister in Law to put her husband in a chastity belt until she is pregnant leaving the key with Denise. She should have the Mother and sister in Law tattooed and peirced maybe have them turn a few tricks. I hope you explain how and when Denise got control.
You wasted you time writing this and I wasted my time reating this. Please don't give up your day job, because you will never make it with this Trash.
Forget that other comment, this story is freaking HOT!!! Cant wait for the next chapter. Hope its soon.