All Comments on 'In Paradise Ch. 01'

eek!!! This sounds good :) can't wait to read more...did she die of embarrassment or is she actually going to die?!

Been waiting for a good IR story in Literotica this year. Hope this will become one of my favorite.

Promising first effort.

....Obviously, Allyn has already developed her high sexuality level ..Please write some stories about her prior job as the beach bar's erotic masseuse at the Hilton's nudist resort in Mallorca..she was popular and averaged 18 half hour "sessions" per day,,she was live on the internet 24/7..the resort had to build bleachers for the loud drunk audiences..She loved the black swingers convention with 7" 380lb. basketball players...what fun...

Continue please...i want to see their relationship develop...very good start

My first approved post and I have so many views in one day. You guys give me the drive to continue. I will try hard not to disappoint...

this was great keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter............

I hope she eventually takes him down a peg