All Comments on 'In Praise of the Bum Ch. 05'

More please! That was very good. The outdoor sex is terrific as is all the teasing. but I'd like to see our hero give it to Jane properly, bending her over the hood of a car or a park bench. Perhaps she could ask him to Roger her... Regardless, it's a great story and I am very happy you wrote another chapter. Thanks!

I think he should lick her asshole till she begs him to fuck her there.

I am a "bum man"too - and this fantasy really has had me going!

You have to keep going cos I want to hear about your exploration of that delicious bum. There is nothing better than a well -shaped firm female arse.

More description of it! Colour of her anus....the soft skin between her arse and her pussy....the delicious scent....the beautiful shape and softness.......etc

Jane is everything we dream of....ha ha

I can only imagine what's going to "cum" next.

Off to bed to dream!!!!!

Great writing Mate

Cheers

HardBen

I think this is called a cliff hanger.... go on it needs at least one or two more chapters.

After all he's not that much of a bum man if he don't seduce her bottom is he?

Shenachie2010