All Comments on 'In Public Places'

Ohh babe is that a dragon on your back .. where in Aus are you. you have no idea how much this one can make a guy feel. we can have dinner out sometime *winks winks winks* just kiddin ya. it was great now im on to these best these men

Im speachless. Is that you in the picture really

Brian

IM NOT SURE IF I SHOULD BE HORNY DISGUSTED OR RAPING MY HUSBAND BUT SHIT IM HOT

CORAL

Ahhhhh Cinders, you know this is my favourite of all your stories,

it

just

makes

me

so....

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ;)

Ahhhhh Cinders, you know this is my favourite of all your stories,

it

just

makes

me

so....

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ;)

Princess xox

dam girl this is one hell of a story i want to thank you cus it allowed me to see things a lil different you go girl keep them coming cus i sure will reading these stories of yours. till the next one take care. xoxo

damn, was fantastic, had me extremely happy, excuse me, now i have to go mop myself up and clean up the drool, thankyou for the story.

My own sub recommended this to me. She had only recently been introduced to the Literotica website and decided that this is definitely one, if not the favorite of the stories she's read so far!

After reading it myself, I definitely agree with her. Very well done!

Thank You all for the comments, I love hearing what you think of my writing, I do have one on the go right now... its nearly finished so look out for it .. The Making of Master Z's Whore.... :-)

Cinerella

I don't understand why he wanted her to please his clients and then got jealous when she did. What am I missing. He wanted he to do it then got mad. I guess I never will understand Doms.