by fgmntfmgnshn
On the edge of too much, but very touching. Nice suspense leading to the hospital. Loved the ending.
I really enjoyed reading this story - in all respects. Thank you.
Masterfully written. You should be writing novels. Pure poetry to read
One of the best pieces of work ever to be found here. Five stars!
And for giving it a perfect ending.
A very powerful read. I wish I could find the words adequate to describe how hard this one hit me. Very well done.
The last 4 words make this a 5/5 stars story !
Surprising, soulful, overwhelming !
Just a great finale !