All Comments on 'In Step Ch. 05'

just keeps getting better and better.....

hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

An incredible, beautiful story. One can almost feel, their love for each other strengthening, as the story gradually unfolds.

The Author is showing a remarkable skill, presenting human emotions.

The talent he showed in this last chapter was awesome. I can't wait to hear what the father was thinking about on the car ride home that the author alluded to. I don't know if there has been a location established for them but where ever it is or ends up should be a place that allows step children to legally be together.

One of the best series I've ever come across. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Fantastic series.

I don't think Donna and the cell phone pics was a good idea, then I had to remind myself this is a story, and a really good one at that. I like how you developed Kendall's character as she went through the confusion of her sexuality...very nicely done. Like many teenage girls she is curious about men and women both and incest aside, she has tried them both and now that she has said the L word to Mark, I have to wonder if she will stay straight? It's 3:17 and I can't put this story down! Thanks so much for writing.

for horny teens. Another good interlude with more to come, I'm sure. Will the cell phone pics open the door for more understanding between the couples and bring them together? What effect will the "L" word bring to the relationship? And is the relationship built only on sex? After all they couldn't keep their hands and other parts off one another after only a few hours of a "normal date." Well, if I remember much of my youth, a normal date usually ended with sex, but I never had my parents or hers involved. So, it will be interesting to see how this progresses. Great story line. Thanks.

TO Bad this story stopped their is so much left to tell.

Very sexy. Hopefully now that Donna's seen the goods, she'll figure out a way to fuck Mark.

after spying on kids uber-hot...love mature women....