All Comments on 'In The Cellar'

very hot!

Damn! From 2008, this story does a great job of sensual description of the female form. Too bad Ganyeka ended his stories after only 3 submissions. Excellent setting of mood and well crafted language get the readed involved in the tone of the piece. The few typos distract, especially the subtext which makes it out to be mmf when it is actually mff. This is not my usual fare, but I recommend it for a well constructed set up (except the odd first paragraph) that gets the reader involved. Others may enjoy this consensual coupling but with the slightest touch of kink.