All Comments on 'In the Club'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Not well written

Shoddy writing always takes the edge off a story. "Alocohol?" "Shaked her head?"<p>I'd say you need an editor; that might have saved this story.

MollyDollyMollyDollyalmost 16 years ago
Pretty hot!

Why is it that sex at the club is so freakin' hot? I don't know, but it's on my "to-do" list!

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