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Click hereIt was a simple task to pick up and begin the journey back to her house. He had no doubt that his mate could protect herself. However, she shouldn't have to. He began to formulate plans and he squeezed her tighter to his body.
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Anonymousover 1 year agoNeed to do better editing to your words and punctuation I found it just a bit hard to tell between the double words and miss use of hims and hers in general talk or comments its not needed so much but in a story i need it to get the grasp without having to decipher what your meaning
Rheamistressabout 4 years agoBeing stuck at home presented me with more than a few problems... Reading material was one of them.. Found this lovely story... good strong beginning. Some characters were fleshed out, some weren't. I am hoping that changes in the future chapters. Looks to be the start of a good book. :)
MizTabout 12 years agoand am really excited. You are off to a great start and I'm off to chapter 2.
Alpha_Marmover 12 years agoLoved your picture of her as her wolf.....sleek...sexy...and powerful. She's also very emotive...colorfully so and he ain't no slouch either. Likes it!!!!!!.
Looking forward to next chapter
silentlysillyalmost 13 years agoAuthorSo I got in touch with an editor and I am anxiously awaiting their reply. Just so you know, cause I made you wait so long this next chapter is 17 word document pages...fingers crossed it will be out soon! Thanks for reading SS
Anonymousalmost 13 years agothis chapter wasawsome! but please write more!!! i NEED to know what's going to happen next!!!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI very much enjoyed it, great start & can not wait to read more
Rudegal74almost 13 years agoThis looks to be a very interesting storyline. You should take up mikothebaby's offer of proofreading before you submit as trying to read and insert what I think you maybe saying takes away from the build-up of reading each line.
Again, the storyline itself is excellent and I do look forward to your next chapter.
mikothebabyalmost 13 years agoI proof read for JazCullen and a few other very good authors here on Lit so I will tender my offer to proof read for you if you have not found any one else yet. I like where this is going and I like to encourage new authors here. Contact me I you want.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI love the way your story has started can't wait to read more. Hopefully the next chapter isn't to far behind.
christyw744almost 13 years agoI really enjoyed this first installment, and I cannot wait for the next. So hurry up!!!! LMAO
