All Comments on 'Indentured Servant'

I liked the story however, the author seemed in a hurry at the end to tie up all the lose ends. I would have enjoyed a few more chapters of the Mrs having exploited Maria before becoming lovers , etc.

Just a readers comments . . . . .

I like reluctance and there was't much of it here. This wasn't so much submission as a loving story. The femdom and submission tags don't apply so much.