All Comments on 'Indian Wife Becomes a Mistress'

This is an amazing story! The details are so vivid that it is easy to believe it is a true adventure! And very well told!

YOUR STORY IS AMAZING. IM SIMPLY STUNNED,U HAV GREAT WRITTING SKILLS IM LOOKING FOWARD TO SOME MORE STORIES FROM YOU AND IT WOULD BE GREAT IF U CAN PUT MORE HINDI DIALOUGES.

KEEP ON IT UP

YOUR STORY IS AMAZING. IM SIMPLY STUNNED,U HAV GREAT WRITTING SKILLS IM LOOKING FOWARD TO SOME MORE STORIES FROM YOU AND IT WOULD BE GREAT IF U CAN PUT MORE HINDI DIALOUGES.

KEEP ON IT UP

One of the most believable story. I had such a strong erection that it hurt..... Wish I could have you.....

simran, you are a wonderful wife, a perfect mistress and a lovely woman..... u know how to satsify two men, emotinally and physically..... u know how to enjoy ... your story really made me wet and i m wet in my pants reading about you... would love more from you

A perfect story. More about young Indian women loving old bulls please!

The lady who has written this is simply one of the most erotic writers that I have ever read ! Not sure, whether she has written a fantasy, or perhaps a true life incident. But, overall, the story was really hot. Hot enough to make any normal man have a hard-on and wish to fuck his wife, or the nearest woman. Atta Girl Simran. Keep it up. - Brijesh Singh, New Delhi, India

hi simran...very erotic.

its almost our story.

we are from india.

me 38yrs my wife 32yrs and her moms younger brother 54yrs have it like this.

it started slowly...now she is almost his wife in bed...

he always tries to get inside her panties...

its become too much...that we have put our two school going kids in a hostel...

our email is anitha.sanker@yahoo.co.in

It was a fantastic story. Please keep on writing. A question: Does your husband perform orally after you had intercourse with the elderly person? Do you plan to arrange a tight pussy for your husband? Thanks

cuck@in.com

Simran, your story is probably one of the best erotic stories, that I have ever read ! And certainly, it is the best erotic story written by an Indian woman writer.

Looking at your picture and your raw sexuality, I sense that this may not be just a story, but perhaps a reflection of true events in your life. If so, then certainly, you are one of the luckiest wives in India, to have such an understanding husband, who wants you to get pleasured fully, by a man, stronger than himself.

Please do keep all of us up-dated. I am sure even the other readers here, are as anxious as me, to read the happenings in your life !

One of the most sensual stories I have read in quite some time. Why shouldn't a couple include a third person (either man or woman) if both agree. A most memorable story!

Simran, why dont you ask Hardayalji and your husband to get more guys with bigger cocks, to fuck your large cunt ? Maybe you should even let Hardayal make your pregnant. He woudd love that. And you too would love that.

Simranji you are so lucky to have a husband like Balwinder saab, due to whom your cunt gets the pleasure of two cocks. Sometimes I too wish that I could have been in Hardayalji's place. Infact, I would have married you and stayed in your house as a second husband to you and would have made you pregnant with my children

very erotic story simranji ever husband having this type of fantasy.

LOVELY. go ahead and do a story with a barely legal boy.

Hey Simran, fantastic yaar. What great writing. Could not control myself at imagining you in the story and had to wank myself. Doll, write more baby. And yes, why dont you make your husband a cuckold by asking him to hold your cunt open for Hardayalji to fuck you, or even ask your husband to suck off Hardayalji's cum from your cunt

Mindless and talentless. One of the worst.

Hi Simran,

I have only words to laud your story-telling skills !

Hai simran, now how enlarged your cunt.is hardayalji wants u to become pregnent by his baby. One sugession next time your hubby and hardayalji come to fuck u same time u can take double penetration bcoz ur cunt is become so big u can hold 2 cocks in ur cunt. feed a lot of cum for a time ur two lovers.best wishes frm me..

illogical and stupidity

What do you expect from illiterate Paky??

The idea of becoming an oldie's mistress when you have two kids is exceptionally erotic. Is it really true...I wonder how can someone manage it!

The idea of wife sharing and swapping really turns me on. But bringing it from fantasy to real world...brave :)

sorry..but I felt there was no realism..it looks like pure fantasy and fiction

hey siman i wanna see ur body.... N 4 saftey purpose plzzz... Blur... Ur face but plzzz... Dont make... Editing in ur body... plzzz... Its a request from a fan....

Superb story. Came four times while reading this and masturbating, thinking of the lady being fucked by an old guy

DEAR SIMRANJI , U ARE THE HOOTTEST WOMAN IN MUMBAI !! U ARE BORN TO BE FUCKEDDDDDD , FUCKED FUCKED & FUCKEDDDDDDDD !!!!!

UR STORY HAS MADE MY PENIS 9 PLUS INCH ROCKKK HARDDDD !!

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Hey Simran, its sooo good to hear such narration

There is some part, that seem to have some truth, but it is a difficult task to separate the truth from fantasy, may be up to the lust of the old man, has some truth.The rest of the story is friction.

Dear Simran, an excellent work by you - good narration; keep it up - expect more stories from you - does not matter to me whether they are true or fiction

Simran, this sounds like a very sexy life for you. Thanks for the story. I did not know that Punjabi women were built like that!

A beautiful build up to a very erotic story. Amazing weaving of erotic scenarios with a twist. Looking forward to reading more from you.

I pre- cumed after reading this. Amazing, please send me the links to your other writings

very hot and spicy

Came three times while reading this story. Damn hot

I CUMMED TWICE..VERY NICE EROTICA..NEED SIMILAR STORY WITH BENGALI ETHNICITY.

its good to read your wirting n you got really good points too. but ur story makes quite a diffrnce.. i vl say u r doing injustice to ur husband by leting someone else cock getting in ur vagina. why dnt u get a women into his life. n den see how mch vl it hurt u simran.. ur husband might say its cool wit him bt somehwr inside his heart itz pitchin him. get a women for him n let him sleep wit her den u vl knw how mch it hurt deep inside the heart..

great story....make me read it again and again

conversation between simran and balwinder is erotic

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The character buildup was excellent. The story is very, very erotic. The menage a trois turned me on. Some women should be allowed to have 2 men in their life because the can make both of them happy.

Wonderful story, very, very exciting indeed! I like the crescendo, the way the characters are described and the plot unravels. The details are exquisitely told, beautiful! I had two consecutive and marvellous orgasms reading this!

Great

as a housewife i so want this kinda life..hope the husb realises it smday...muaaaahhh

watta sexy lady. u r not simran but super simran.

Thanks Simran for the interesting narration. You do understand a woman's desire and physical needs. Wish you had written a few more stories.

Riya

i wish you are my sweet wife

If I could have given this story more than * * * * *, I would have. It is absolutely one of the very best stories I have ever read in my life.

I have long held that polyandry is the idea situation for a woman...though not necessarily for sexual reasons. In this case, it is a perfect situation for her and I heartily approve. My wife has had a b/f since five years before she and I met. I have fantasized about such an arrangement between her, him and me and we have discussed such a fantasy on more than one occasion. In my fantasy, we would build another bedroom on the house for him and she could choose where to spend the night on each night. The b/f and she now live on opposite sides of the country so no such will ever happen.

In most occasions during our nearly 20 years together, when another man has been involved, it has been a threesome with my enjoying watching her pleasure and joining in. One bed.

We have just finished building a "guest bedroom" in a separate structure behind our home. I can serve a multiplicity of functions. Use your imagination.

Now....Please let us eager readers learn more...!!!

Of course it is erotic fiction and certain things must be simplified.

The dialogues may appear simplified but only if taken out of contest: WHEN A HUSBAND TELLS HIS WIFE THAT HE WANTS HER TO FEEL ANOTHER MAN'S COCK INSIDE HER PUSSY AND THAT HE WANTS HER TO COME BACK TO HIM BECAUSE SHE WILL ALWAYS BE HIS WIFE WHOM HE ADORES - THAT'S AN EXPRESSION OF LOVE WITHOUT BOUNDARIES. Is that kind of live square? We all know the answer. Is that kind of love frequent in society? No it is not.

But when a couple experiences that kind of love (& passion that accompanies it) they achieve a state of happiness they did not know existed.

I myself experienced it and will hopefully travel that road again if i am ever reincarnated.

My wife had a lover for several years. She admitted to me she had hots for him big time. She was getting obsessive about him. I suggested that the 3 of us start going out together & assured her the mystery & infatuation would fade away. She wanted him even more. When i gave her the permission to fuck him I told her i loved her very much and would love her no matter what she was going to do as long as she comes home afterwards. The situation dtrenghened our bond to new levels. For her first one-on-one date with him I NOUGHT her the underwear and helped her decide what to wear. "This is all so new to me. I need your help... How do i look? ... I want you to know i love you & will always come back to you... If you have any second thoughts anout this please tell me now before he comes to pick me up... I love you very much. I am do happy YOU are my husband."

I can not describe how much more i wanted her after i started sharing her. How much self confidence she gained. She handled stress much better. LAST BUT NOT LEAST SHE WAS BETTER IN BED.

such a beautiful story. Simran has been the object of imagination and fantasy.. please write more

As a man that has had the pleasure of giving a Punjabi woman a BBC, this story was such a turn on. Indian pussy is one of the best out there.

I encourage you to keep writing, looking forward to reading more from you.

Very nice story, its so erotic, I have read it several times and each time it makes me masterbate. This story is so realistic. I wish it should happen in my life too.

you have a gift Simran - you are able to enjoy 2 men , hope you get more men in life and u get more happiness and we get to read more of your experiences :)

u are a great writer. i would like to read more!

It's sad that when searched for the most favorited story with the tag Indian is searched, this comes up on the top. Although no one is going for hard realism here but it needs to be believable in the world the story's taking place. This has paper thin plot, overused motivations for characters and the shittiest thing, the dialogues. Disappointing if looking for an immersive, or even half decent experience

one of the best i have ever read. please write more

Actually the story is multifaceted.

It is very erotic without being pornographic.

It is a sex story, a wife sharing story, a love story, a self-discovery story, a polyandry story... all in one! All of that is in a mix. There is a strong synergy between those facets. The final result is something more than the simple sum of parts.

Last but not least: the wife's Punjabi large & fleshy buttocks: PRICELESS!!!

I am not the only one who likes this story: it's got 438,815 views & 277 favorites. Impressive!

As I read your story, I identifed with Balwinder. Very much like him, I love my wife not only truly, madly, deeply, but also selflessly, & unconditionally! She & I moved to Canada when she was in her early 30s & a mother of two (age 6 & 1). I undetstand what Balwinder is going through & how obsessively he adores his wife.

If you really really adore your wife, her happiness is # 2 on your priority list (children are always # 1). Once you adore your wife & her body, you will adore her (& her body!) even more when you start sharing her. Simran_Ahluwalia has masterfully depicted the transition, which for the lucky few is just 'the logical next step'.

SIMRAN IS A KEEPER! She can make two men happy, & love both of them truly, madly, deeply. If I were either her husband or her lover, I'd feel I am both in 7th heaven & on cloud number 9 @ the same time!

A man who shares his wife is not a wimp: (a) he is kinky &

(b) he loves his wife more than he loves himself.

I’m in late 30s happily married and blessed with two children. While my husband Rahul is very caring, his childhood buddy Kumar is divorced. I’m 5’4” with 36” chest and ‘D’ size cups. My sexual appetite increased miltifold after both my kids started going to school. Kumar was visiting us very frequently and enjoyed our company thoroughly. He calls me bhabi and even used to help me in the kitchen. One day on my birthday he couldn’t stop praising my beauty with my husband. Over period of time his appreciation grew more for me. With my husband’s encouragement I pleased Kumar. Our relationship grew stronger ever since and I became Kumar’s mistress. We all live under same roof and leading a very happy life.

Your mastery in English! Really appreciable. And then it is really sweet to see that how a well educated, normal woman describes how she has been fucked, in such an explicit manner! I can just visualised how you fucked your husband, and that elder man. No video needed! Thanks for your narrating skills? Why don't you write another sequel to it?

I am simply stunned by your English, and explicitness you express which actually runs as a virtual video before me! Like to communicate with you!

A great story. I always get super aroused when I read this story. Awesome.

Porn story with such superfluous refined language and titillating to the core. Well Done. Thank you

very nice story

☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0)!

A man who shares his wife is not a wimp:

(a) he is kinky;

(b) he loves his wife more than he loves himself.

(c) he worships his wife and her body.

(Inspired by anon comment from 2 years ago.)

Five 💚s!

The three of you are doing nothing wrong whatsoever!

Some women both really need, and objectively deserve, two men! In this context I do mean it sexually. Such a family is better off financially. Children have 2 dads to take turns to take them to the park, to the swimming pool, to the nature, you name it.

I do believe that a wife and a mother should occasionally have sex with other men. In most cases that makes her happy, and children of a happy mother tend to be less anxious and insecure, and tend to have better self-esteem.

Yes i ageee you

Excerpt from this story (I gave it a 5.0):

"Yes, Hardayalji. You heard me right. You want my wife's body. My wife too is excited about you and wants to experience your organ. So, both of you can fulfill your desires tonight. But after you finish with her, please send her back to my bedroom. I shall be awake and waiting for her tonight. You can even pump your sperms straight into her ...."

In my book, this Indian Punjabi wife sex story is a tour the force!

It is definitely erotic, and romantic, and in its own way, even poetic too.

As of May 03/21 it has got 386 favorites (faves) out of 559.8K views, which is an excellent faves-to-views ratio of 0.69 faves per 1K views. This story has passed the test of time with flying colors in light of the fact that 12 years later it is still popular and being favorited.

Bravissimo!

For Indian Wife Becomes a Mistress, I gave you a 5 (⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐)!

For your description od the Punjabi wife, I gave you a 5+ [5.25/5= 105 (★★★★★)]!

★★★★★- (5-)!

This is a great story, I absolutely love it. One of the best I have read in a long while. It is a pity that you have not written more. Some day maybe ?

we are waiting for another story.

Are you going to write some more?

I have some idea how to continue this story and love to write the second part of this story

The last page where she explains how she is treated like a sex toy as well as take care of, is too sexy.

The only thing missing from this is description of you plonking your cum filled cunt on your husband's face

I'm copy pasting another user's comments:

"robertjohn - 8 months ago

This is a great story, I absolutely love it. One of the best I have read in a long while. It is a pity that you have not written more. Some day maybe ?"

Love this story: 5- (4.6 = 92%, ❤💛💚💙💜-).

👍👍

Let her have a sandwich pose with both her holes being drilled together

Awesome feel reading such stories....never tried so openly......shud try soon if hubby accepts it ..chennaishobs

5.0 = 💯% (💜💙💚💛❤) 👍👍!

Erotic above expectations!

I'm copy pasting another user's comment because it makes sense in my book.

Quote:

Anonymous - over 1 year ago

In my book, this Indian Punjabi wife sex story is a tour the force!

It is definitely erotic, and romantic, and in its own way, even poetic too.

As of May 03/21 it has got 386 favorites (faves) out of 559.8K views, which is an excellent faves-to-views ratio of 0.69 faves per 1K views. This story has passed the test of time with flying colors in light of the fact that 12 years later it is still popular and being favorited.

End quote.

Very hot story. Cant wait for any more such stories

Dear Simran,

there's no doubt that you're not only good in writing but also good in imitating from someone else's story.

Shocked !!!

Well, no need to. Just for your reminder, A WIDOW'S LIFE WRECKED, written by Jayashree100.

Came across your story and it is well written and so erotic. It was over 14 years ago would like to read everything that has happened since.

❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ (5)

Excellent: ★★★★★- (5- = 4.6 = 92%)!

Fun and games for the wife!

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Mai, 23, Hindu wif from North India hu. Mera shadi 18 sal pe hoya shadi se pehle mery fast friend Puja Aggarwal ke ghr gayo to puja regular mei apne padosi Jethumal (48) se chuwati thi; uss din unke rquwest pe mai bhi unke sath 2 pag sharab pi, fir Jethumal mujey bhi choda. uske bad bhi jethu mere ko 5- 6 bad aur choda, fir mera shadi ye shar se 5 mile door mei ek clerk (27) ke sath 18 sal mei ho gayi. Mera pati ka 5 inch ka hai aur pani bhi jaldi chodta ha. shadi ke 7 mahine bad Jethu chu chap milne aya. Bola bahana bana ke -5 roj ke liya milne aja.. Iska 7 inch hai so maza bhi ata hai. Mera sas 4-5 mahine pahle mar gaya tha. Mere pati ko gao se phone aya ki tera puppa ki tabiyat khaeab hai, ek mahine bad ya aur thoa din bad uska operation hona hai. Pati ghabra gaya aur afle din gaon chala gaya. Mai ussi din apne ghar gayi. Jethu apne dost ke khali ghar mei prgram banaya. Rat ko mai udhar gayi, Jerhu do bar kiya. ham dono nange so gaye. Darwaja band nahi tha. Ek admi jagaya ham dono ghabra gaye. Wo admi hame dekh liya acche se. 3-4 ghant e bad Jethu aya aur bola ki wo mere ghar mei sab batayega. Jethu ne use 100rupaye diya lekin wo bola ki ruoaye to thiik hai par wo mujhe bhi lege apne ghar le ja ke. Jethu man gaya fir muje chod kar chala gaya. muje bol ke gaya ki wo admi sham ko 4 baje muje lene ayega. Mene uss admi ko nahi dekha, lekin wo jethu ko dekha aur mujhe face se dekh liya tha.

sham ko wo aya. bilkul patla sa, banyan aur pajama pahne. Mere ko ek chote se 1 khra ka ghar mei le gaya, aur daru ki botal aur namkin laya. rat 8 muje kapde utarne ko bol kar ghar ke bahar peshab karne gaya. 10 minat bad wo aya bilkul nanga. mai kapde nahi utare. Uska 9 inch se kam nahi tha. mota bhi tha jyada. mai darr gayi. usne guse se kapde utar kar lata diya aur fatafat chuday shuru ki. sachi bohot dard hua aur maja bhi bohot aya. Iska nam Ikram the, ye 47 sal ka tha. Ma uske ghar 5 din ruki. Itna din mei Ikram ke 7 dost ya ristedar aye. Sab 6 so 66 sal ke bich ke the. khub choda sab ne. Agli bar jawan ladko se bhi chudwane ka vada kiya. Abhi mere bachha thehar gaya hai. Puja Aggarwal

Simran,You have two children from your husband Balwinder.Now you are mistress of Hardayalji who is fucking you regularly.Has Hardayal made you pregnant ?How many children have you from Hardayaljj?

Simran,after reading the story I have started loving youand want to marry you and make you my wife.I will give you extreme sexual pleasure when my 9 inches long and 3ins thick cock will enter your cunt.We both will fuck everyday until you get pregnant.After you carry my child in your womb then we will start anal sex my darling.With great difficulty my thick cock will enter your anus and we both will enjoy anal sex.We both will have 2 sons and 2 daughters. By the way my cock is circumcised and will give great pleasure when it glides inside your cunt(vagina).

i truly got an idea now from u to convince my hubby too and have both men at home enjoy with me. thanks so much

Simran,did you marry Hardayalji and become his wife because you slept with him and also had sex with him several times.Did you have any child with him?