All Comments on 'Ingrid Ch. 01'

Great start. Interesting characters. Plenty of Potential

Easy read, good character development, excellent grammar and spelling. I like it and really encourage you to continue!

Well witten and elaborated. Very nice people.

I'm not sure, but I think I may have read this before, but looks good enough for a re-read.

Did she know where to meet? It was never mentioned in the phone call!!

Richard May

This is another incomplete story on lit.

A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story and series. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my second foray into your writing and a rewrite of the second story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.