All Comments on 'Ingrid Ch. 01'

A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story and series. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my second foray into your writing and a rewrite of the second story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

This is another incomplete story on lit.

Did she know where to meet? It was never mentioned in the phone call!!

Richard May

I'm not sure, but I think I may have read this before, but looks good enough for a re-read.

Well witten and elaborated. Very nice people.

Easy read, good character development, excellent grammar and spelling. I like it and really encourage you to continue!

Great start. Interesting characters. Plenty of Potential