by magmaman
Hero is a bit of a idiot at times,meets a great woman and blows it,oh well. Well written,looking foward to the rest,Thanks!
living by principles is good, but not everybody can see that like Katey. She wanted everything now, he wanted her later. Bad timing, but that is what life is all about, isn't it ? Time to move on indeed. G.Belgium
I gave you 100 but the ending just didnt work. You have something great here but need to continue.
there is no chance of another chapter to this story, the ending just isn't an ending.
Every time - the only question is will it reward you enough ???