All Comments on 'Initial Public Offering'

a new and exciting author~i can't wait to read more of what he has to say about all things erotic!

Intelligent, sensitive and undeniably erotic. More please!

i loved how the story didn't follow the usual receipe of plots. it wasn't like it's never been done before, but it's always a pleasure to find a surprising twist. Couldn't help but sighing "wow" after reading the story. Thanks for the delightful read.

lovely writing lovely structure to the story could almost smell the sweat and hear her cry out. great! Matt

Words as foreplay, and aphrodisiac. Worked for me. :-)

Can you say run-on sentences? An entire long paragraph in a single breath? Wordy to the extreme! Sexy, yes but off-putting and somewhat uncommunicative, possibly by design.