All Comments on 'Initiation'

by dgharis

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estragonestragonalmost 13 years ago
Hot and Kinky

Very hot concept, incest meets BDSM. Good stroke material. And your writing is good. I have only a few quibbles, which follow via "Send Feedback". Now write one about how spank-my-ass-and-call-me-Shirley turns the tables on the parental units and fucks their brains out.

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