All Comments on 'Inkwell Ch. 03'

Great addition to the story line. *grins* Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great writing.

...Is very difficult to read. Many of your sentences make no sense. So the story is lost for that idea.

A good dictionary and thesaurus are vital tools in the writing process. You have a particularly great need for these two reference books, as you frequently misspell, and misplace words Additionally you often use the entirely incorrect word.

If you want to receive scores above 3 you need to do a couple of things. First use you spell checker. Second proof read your story out loud and fix the obvious errors that you hear.

Others have given you comments. Listen to them they are not ripping you because your story sucks. They are ripping you because your story is good but your errors in writing hurt their heads. Make a frend of another author and trade editing services. It will help you a lot.

Good fortune with your craft.

DePaul

The only reason I'm still reading is your sense of humor, I love it! However, your spelling, grammar, and sentence structure are really horrible! Please invest in an English class, and a Creative Writing class.