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"How do you know that?" Shesin snapped.
"It just makes sense, why do any of you come to the mortal realm? To do and feel what you can't up there. If she allows it in her domain, it would kinda be like coming half way here. How old is the youngest living being in the higher realm?" He asked.
"I don't know, 300 years old."
"So no one is being born in the higher realm? And no one dies? And no one is allowed to grow, learn, or experience without coming here. The realm is falling to its own stagnation, it's dying." He said.
Shesin sat there in fear and excitement. She lifted her leg and stuck three fingers into her pussy. He stood up and walked to the kitchen, looking out the window at the oak in the back yard he had a thought.
"You want to help me?" He asked.
"I will do whatever you tell me to." She answered.
"I'm not telling you, I am giving you a choice. Gift of the mortal realm, free will." He said.
"You're not joking? I can say no...?" She asked and fainted anyway in a wave of orgasm.
He looked over at the succubus shaking his head. A picture of what the 'higher realms' really were coming in to focus for him. It still left questions for him, like how he fit in this, it wasn't chance so what was he in this grand equation. He held authority enough to send Fates and a demi-goddess back. So what did that mean? He was going to have to be vigilant from now on. Keeping himself guarded from any others of the higher realm that might follow Styx's example.
For that he was going to need friends. "Ducici I hope this works and we are still friends." He whispered.
- COMMENTS
bearminxover 5 years agoThe only reason I'm still reading is your sense of humor, I love it! However, your spelling, grammar, and sentence structure are really horrible! Please invest in an English class, and a Creative Writing class.
Anonymousover 6 years agoIf you want to receive scores above 3 you need to do a couple of things. First use you spell checker. Second proof read your story out loud and fix the obvious errors that you hear.
Others have given you comments. Listen to them they are not ripping you because your story sucks. They are ripping you because your story is good but your errors in writing hurt their heads. Make a frend of another author and trade editing services. It will help you a lot.
Good fortune with your craft.
DePaul
up11pendragonover 6 years ago...Is very difficult to read. Many of your sentences make no sense. So the story is lost for that idea.
A good dictionary and thesaurus are vital tools in the writing process. You have a particularly great need for these two reference books, as you frequently misspell, and misplace words Additionally you often use the entirely incorrect word.
aisielynnover 10 years agoGreat addition to the story line. *grins* Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great writing.
