All Comments on 'Insatiable Man'

Not sure that's a compliment. Decent story, but felt that the writer was trying too hard to be "author-like". I guess I shouldn't complain considering some of the total garbage that's on Lit. I gave it a three because this person writes well, despite the fact that the story lost it's sexy edge due to the style. I didn't find it erotic. Sorry!

I feel the story was easy to follow and a pleasure to read. Reading your work reminds of me what my wife thinks about sex, which I appreciated. Thank you for the sexy story!