All Comments on 'Inside Her Head'

What a wonderful introduction to your talent as a writer of erotica this was - you have every right to feel well-pl;eased with this! I hope it will be just the first of many stories you post here for our delight - well done, thank you and you may have five shiny stars for this one!

Very intense first story, well-written. Good action. Hope you post more stories.

Very good, and so hot. I hope you keep writing!

Thanks for the great story! You totally made me smile! Hope you keep writing.

Very nasty 'put down' name calling, I feel that anybody who had any feeling for another person could not use such hateful words to them, I personally would not stay in a relationship where my partner would think so little of me and be so insulting. Words have an immense amount of power when misused.

Personally i liked it. some people get off on the name calling and as long as both the sub and dom agree that's its ok then don't see a problem with it. to each its own five stars from me and would love continued adventures from them. great read :-) for your first submission

My Master would never hit me.

from a submissive's P.O.V, holy fuck this is incredible. I was squirming in need from the way he punished her and degraded her, i loved the name calling and the way she begged him for more. wonderful piece.