All Comments on 'Inside the Green Door'

I gave up - too hard to read!

Nice venture into Lesbianland! It got a little "wordy" around the action, instead of reflection after the fact, but still quite enjoyable from a true readers standpoint. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

but it's only just beginning. You've teased us with public groping, lusty lavatory power play, and more secret dominance/submission in a taxi. You simply must let us follow them inside the green door.

I rather enjoyed your descriptiveness during the lead in and during the initial encounter, but I think a couple paragraphs were a bit too wordy for me.

Please continue this story