by Honey123
Awsome, ladies. 'Course, you've made it so I can't stand up, at the moment.
Honey, you always satisfy......... Even reading it during the early stages, I was still caught thinking what a lucky guy until you got under her skirt......
Nicely done!! A joy to read!
Mtn
You can work at my office anytime! Mmmmmm...it passes the test! I'm hard, oh yeah! Thanks ladies!
Excuse me for being crude, but the first thing that came to mind:
"This is some hot shit! WHOO-HOO!"
Ahem. Ladies, wonderful job! This story is daring, passionate and sizzling hot. Y'all should team up more often! Brava!
Sublime, exquisite ladies, fantastic. Erotic, hot and plenty of sexual tension.
Another great erotic story Honey.
B
The two of you have captured a sizzling moment of seduction very well. The moment is intense, moving and so sensual.
Thank you. Some more please.
Hugo
Mmmmmmm - tastes so good! And to think - many of us got to be there at the birth, watching this story grow passage by passage and Nirvana and Honey lovingly traded it back and forth on the boards here. Very nice, ladies! You are both very talented.
OMFG this is SO HOT!! I can SO see Nirvana and Honey playing out this story!!! SO HOT!!!
Hot, hot, hot, ladies. Very intensely drawn little interludes. Loved it. eric
I ABSolutely loved writing this with you. The whole idea was fun and innocent and just delightful. You made it incredibly easy to put myself in that situation and go with the flow.
You are truly a Goddess...thank you for being my friend and my muse for this story...
Love ya lots..
~Honey-girl
That was lovely writing. I could see the whole thing happening as I read it. A really wonderful story.
It was an absolute pleasure writing this with you... it seems as if the enjoyment is mutually shared by all...plentiful and prosperous!
We should do another orgasm soon (wink)
Nirvana
xxx
......it's nice to read such a descriptive and intensely sensual tale of two women enjoying each other's bodies. Rather vivid and it DID get me hard.
Another hot story, Honey. You two sound really 'inspired' there...and the rest of us get to benefit! Nice work, as always...
What else is there to say really? Writing with you is a delight, as I can testify. And reading the outcome of this is no less. :)
Very hot interlude!!!
I wish there would be more stories with such an "anticipation-touch" around here.
I also love your sensual description!
Great work!!
well, that's another pair of knickers consigned to the dirty clothes basket! i just want to go for dinner with them, well bed really. You write such erotic tales that I get to wonder what your own love life is like!! Is this from experience? If it is, then I want dinner with you. lol.
This was a beautiful story. I'm glad I was told about you. I'll definitely read more, and I think you should plan on writing more.
Honey.....a very sexy hot story.....just something about 2 woman...mmmmmmmmm