by PervOtaku
Good back story and setup. The history/details are interesting and add an additional layer that is mostly missing from these stories.
You have a lot of back story here, and it's well-written and compels me to read it. I really enjoy your demon's attitude; he's very entertaining to read. I wouldn't mind more tactile details on the actual sex scene. Also, it's not really clear where your doctor is sitting. I'm guessing it's between the two doors?
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Anne Rice, eat your heart out! Vampires are nice, but a tentacle demon, now THAT is interesting!
Well done, and I look forward to the rest of the story!
I just read the first installment of your fine story, and I am hooked! This is delicious reading, and I can't wait to read part 2! Good work!
Looking forward to the future installments. I enjoyed the history of tentacle demons in Japan.