All Comments on 'Interview with Tentacle Demon Ch. 01'

by PervOtaku

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 10 years ago
Awesome

Feeding... that's going to be fun.

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 10 years ago

looking forward to the next installment

wl3002323wl3002323over 10 years ago

Good back story and setup. The history/details are interesting and add an additional layer that is mostly missing from these stories.

purpledragonflypurpledragonflyover 10 years ago
entertaining

You have a lot of back story here, and it's well-written and compels me to read it. I really enjoy your demon's attitude; he's very entertaining to read. I wouldn't mind more tactile details on the actual sex scene. Also, it's not really clear where your doctor is sitting. I'm guessing it's between the two doors?

Looking forward to the next chapter!

DiannahDiannahover 10 years ago
4 stars

Anne Rice, eat your heart out! Vampires are nice, but a tentacle demon, now THAT is interesting!

Well done, and I look forward to the rest of the story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
awesome story

cool story, excellent narration.... too hot!

LinusmittyLinusmittyabout 9 years ago
Hooked!

I just read the first installment of your fine story, and I am hooked! This is delicious reading, and I can't wait to read part 2! Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Enjoyable

Looking forward to the future installments. I enjoyed the history of tentacle demons in Japan.

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