All Comments on 'Into the Abyss Ch. 07'

I can't wait for chapter eight to come out!!!

I wish I could post the rest. I've written through chapter 11, but something has gone wrong with my password. I can sign onto the lit side but not the members side. I've sent a dozen emails, but no reply. Sorry.

~grace

I would love to read the rest of the story it's awesome :-)

Love, LOVE, this series. I long to read more..... Please post more in this story when you are able to.

I saw the post you are having password and account problems. I hope they are resolved soon and you are able to continuing to share the rest of the story with us. I'm eagerly waiting for more.....

I can't wait for Ch. 08!

Wish you could post the rest of the story!

I'm really looking forward to the next installments. Please keep them coming.

Amazing stories...cant wait for chapter 8!

Oh my god please post the rest of this story!! It's captivated me and my pussy all night!

This story needs to continue! It's so good... Please write the next chapter x

Update the next chapter damn you!

looks like you powered yourself out in the middle of a story.

what about karen?

tell us how he can handle a stronger girl.

how will they act in a threesome?

there are so much possible turns in a story with that potential...

with the other chapters. This one is choppy and, even though the characters are all there, it's kind of derails the pacing of the overall story. It's been quite some time since you last wrote; if you were to pick this up again, I'd like to see it follow more along the lines of the earlier chapters.

Just read this and really enjoyed it. Would love to read more of Rick and Patty's story.

Beautiful, erotic, stimulating! Waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!