All Comments on 'Into the Night Ch. 03'

Wow,

please continue this story it was hot loved the images it brought to mind, keep up the good work.

wow

one of the hottes stories ever. You are very good at depicting sexual escenes charged with action and lust

Congratulations..... a real talent

Just good ole nut busting, tit shaking, suckin' and fuckin'!

A real rod twister! Congratulations! Keep 'em cumming!

Nothing like nut busting, cock twisting, heart stopping fucking. The basics ALWAYS please. Damn fine story!

Make no mistake, you write good sex. However, why? What's the deal with his mother? His Aunt? His Mother and Aunt's history? Why? Your characters have just spent three installments balling on the Olympic level without any development of character, motives, history or plot.

This is too good to let be a simple -yet scorchingly hot- Spank Fic.

Sweet.

I like that he thinks of his mother's needs before his Aunt's.

Just a very erotic and descriptive story.

Thanks

why he need another pussy when he is getting the best. u just killed a good story ,

...are worth a grade of 2/5 stars overall. The final part being the worst by going over the top with the aunt getting into the picture. Like someone said in a past comment, you got into the sex way too soon so it reads like a bad "letter to Penthouse" story.

It's not erotic or hot. It's just going through a thesaurus and describing the mechanics of the main types of sex over and over again. Thrust, pump, suck, pinch, squeeze and so on. Lather, rinse and repeat with a pause for a bowl of porridge or some toast for sustenance. New chapter, more of same. Last chapter, better throw in a second female for some girl-on-girl action too. Stir well and repeat some more.

How much hotter would this series have been if we had learned just a bit better about who this mother-son pair were apart from random names and suitable ages. Then all the sex would be exciting and not just mechanical cut-and-paste.

You have done much better and hopefully did/will again.

Should have included the aunt kinda ruin the honeymoon/love atmosphere that was going on didn't like her at all really.

Hope you knocked up mom and aunt thats what I did us 3 on vacatiom in hotel room