All Comments on 'Intrigued Ch. 05'

That's how you end the chapter??? You have to get the next one ready soon!

poor Jenna, good bye Jenna

this chapter was too short...Argh!!! Still loved it though. Too bad for Jenna, she's gonna get her heart broken. I do really like her, but I want Raven to end up with Keegan. Do I think he should let her in his life immediately? No. I'm mad at how she watched him from afar and just thinks she can storm into his life whenever she sees fit...fuck that noise. He was deeply depressed trying to find her for a month and when he's showing signs of happiness here she comes like she's some prize, hell to the NO!

Jenna is a grown ass woman. She knew right along where things stood with Keegan.

She isn't a teenager. He was bumming out. She knew it, saw a chance to slip through and did. Who can be mad at her? The chick was hungry for some juicy man meat. It was what it was.

He seems to show emotion towards her and connect with her on a different level. The reason I feel bad for her is because I feel like he is leading her on. Now Raven is back and things are going to get complicated. I hope Jenna is not hurt in the end. I hope Raven and her are happy.

Too bad for Jenna.I actually like her and think she would be good for Keegan...plus she's human.

Oh well...

I'm rereading this for the millionth time and everytime I'm reminded of how pathetic Jenna was. I understand wanting what you want but working every single day to see a guy who chose another woman over you?! After five minutes? And he was so in pussy lust that he missed the biggest warning signs. This chick is basically crazy town, staring at him like he's famous, and you don't use a condom because she says she's on the pill? Yeah no!

Yeah Raven was wrong but she's so damaged herself she can't see it. Add in the who live forever thing versus his mortality. I understand why she ghosted him, even if it isn't right.

Keegan and Raven have a connection, which is why they can't get each other out of their heads. Keegan was just settling for Jenna since his heart was broken and she let herself be used. No poor Jenna