- NonHuman
- Intrigued Ch. 05
- Page 2
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I looked at my clock: 1:42 pm. I couldn't stand it anymore. I picked up my phone and sent Jenna a text message:
Me: Hey Beautiful... Whatcha up to?
Jenna: O, nothing, jst lyin here thinking about you...
Me: Rly? I just got home n took a shower about to take a nap
Jenna: Ya rly! I work 2nite so if u wanna come to the Riff and keep me company
Me: I'll b there... Nite Gorgeous!
Jenna: Nite Sexy
The text messages made me feel a lot better. I walked into my room and collapsed in my bed. It seemed like the second I closed my eyes. I was awakened by loud knocking on my front door. "Who the hell?" I said aloud as I looked at the clock on my bedside table: 9:15 pm.
I stumbled to my feet and walked into my living room. "Just a second!" I yelled as the knocking persisted. I cracked the door to see who it was, peephole forgotten. Standing before me was the woman of my dreams for the last month: Raven.
"Raven?" I said in shock, letting the door open all the way. "What are you doing here?" I asked, staring at her completely dumbfounded.
"Can a girl not visit a friend? Is this a bad time? I hope that I am not interrupting anything," she said, her eyes rolling over my nearly naked body.
"Oh no... not at all," I said staring down at her. There was definitely something I should be doing right now, I just had no idea what it was.
She took a step toward me, until her tits were nearly touching my chest. "Are you going to invite me in?" she asked, her brown eyes boring into mine.
"Yes, of course," I said, stepping aside, "Please, come in."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoI'm rereading this for the millionth time and everytime I'm reminded of how pathetic Jenna was. I understand wanting what you want but working every single day to see a guy who chose another woman over you?! After five minutes? And he was so in pussy lust that he missed the biggest warning signs. This chick is basically crazy town, staring at him like he's famous, and you don't use a condom because she says she's on the pill? Yeah no!
Yeah Raven was wrong but she's so damaged herself she can't see it. Add in the who live forever thing versus his mortality. I understand why she ghosted him, even if it isn't right.
Keegan and Raven have a connection, which is why they can't get each other out of their heads. Keegan was just settling for Jenna since his heart was broken and she let herself be used. No poor Jenna
Trinity71almost 8 years agoToo bad for Jenna.I actually like her and think she would be good for Keegan...plus she's human.
Oh well...
Maybelline19about 12 years agoHe seems to show emotion towards her and connect with her on a different level. The reason I feel bad for her is because I feel like he is leading her on. Now Raven is back and things are going to get complicated. I hope Jenna is not hurt in the end. I hope Raven and her are happy.
Alpha_Marmover 12 years agoJenna is a grown ass woman. She knew right along where things stood with Keegan.
She isn't a teenager. He was bumming out. She knew it, saw a chance to slip through and did. Who can be mad at her? The chick was hungry for some juicy man meat. It was what it was.
got2luvmelover 12 years agothis chapter was too short...Argh!!! Still loved it though. Too bad for Jenna, she's gonna get her heart broken. I do really like her, but I want Raven to end up with Keegan. Do I think he should let her in his life immediately? No. I'm mad at how she watched him from afar and just thinks she can storm into his life whenever she sees fit...fuck that noise. He was deeply depressed trying to find her for a month and when he's showing signs of happiness here she comes like she's some prize, hell to the NO!
