All Comments on 'Invisibility at High School Ch. 02'

I have now read chapter #1 & #2,,,in #1,he became invisible after a short prayer,,,BUT you never explain how & when he becomes "VISIBLE",,,or how he knows how too become "INVISIBLE" again as he did at the end of gym class in chapter #2...

I have to say i like the simple way this story goes .....however its far too short and doesnt give many details.....plus its been ages in between you writing the second part......lets hope you write a longer more descriptive 3rd part soon.

I loved it keep writing.

Awsome. Hope more come sooner.

I have read both chapters of this story and I must say that I like it very much. I have to admit that I agree with the reviews "puzzled" and "too short." This is a great short story that gives you all the information, but a little more discription would probably put it over the top. In the third installment, and I hope there is a third, just try to add how he activates and deactivates his power. That should clear up some of the confusion.

Kenobi! There must be future installments of the sexual adventures of Luke and his powers! Please!!

Please this story is great dont leave it hanging like that unless you have it posted somewhere else you could tell maybe please?

The first chapter was awesome. This was alright. He was invisible in the girls locker room and didn't even try to grope someone else?

good story. needs more girls maybe luke's friend gets powers too and they tag team it.

I have come to this conclsn that since this story was posted in 2004 and has no sequels to it. Kenobi (the writer) has been taken away by a secret government agency/ advanced alien race/ sadistic grandmother/ IRS /___________(insert whatever you think has happened to him/her) and thus there will be no sequels written by this member.If anybody else has decided to continue this series pls notify us in this space.

please take a moment of silence to show our respect to this dead story line.

Thank you.

I'd be glad to continue this storyline. It's got quite a bit of promise.

Unless anyone shoots me down between now and when I put it up, I'll run with it.

I didn't want to go through the red tape involved with adapting kenobi's series as my own.

But I did right "The Invisible High School Student" as a spiritual successor. Hope you guys will check it out.

In honour of the great visionary Kenobi I hearby acknowledge his untimely departure (metaphorically speaking).

This series had and has potential. A third installment would have tied up the questions that the first two commenters had.

Wherever you are Kenobi, I do hope you're revisiting and reinvigorating your creative flow.

you know you got add to the story

man you have got to add a chapter three, this is awesome so far

I really love this story and it would be a shame if it just stopped. It has great potential and I really hope you will add another chapter.

Make more stories

If you're still active, PLEASE make more stories. I realize this is old but they are amazing and well written!

You definitely need to keep going

Please show us them at her place

Should def keep going. Not to shabby for pretty much pure smut.