All Comments on 'Invisible Glenn'

Great beginning, great idea, unlimited possibilities

Sorry, but it was a good concept...just poorly executed and written. You have the woman talking out loud as if someone were there. Her comments were too forced and seemed unreal.

Great idea with terrific possibilities, however poorly written and very unimaginative. It would be good if you could get an editor to help you.

Good start. And it was cool and all that he could walk through stuff but that means that he wouldnt be able to interact with his environment at all. That and forced dialog are what really through me off. I hope you keep up an effort

Awsome...... but try to improvise it to make it glenn touch and do more.... but good concept