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I gave you a 5 vote for your effort.

no chance you could stick the pen you wrote this crap with up your ass.

This site & this category has turned into a fuking freak show! This belongs in Fetish or BDSM or "Slut wives, cum-sucking wimpy husbands" category. And on top of that it is very poorly written, not erotic, not anything really, but pitiful.

I would happily give you six stars, except Lit only allows five and I'm unhappy with the length of the story. It should be much longer! Please keep writing and don't let the idiots who are so afraid of strong women get you down.

This guy is a man...I think not! She's accomodating herself and idiot is paying for it. By the way, this kind of guy doesn't hold a job because any people he works with begin (quickly) to realize that this is one low life, no self-esteem, sick, wimp, loser anf nobody, man or woman, wants to be friends with him or work with him.

Any real woman, married or engaged, to a guy that began to have these tendancies would run from him...a real woman, even a hot wife with an open relationship, would not have any respect for this guy or want anyone to know she even knew this loser!

Writer, you do have potential so go ahead. If you want to beat up on men then pick up on the ones that you see in bars with cocky atttitudes that have all the right sayings, slogans and believe they are Gods Gift to Woman...screw them up, in fact turn them into fags.

I love it!! I'm stroking in my panties... hoping Wife will do this to me!! Great first story!!

A commenter wrote "Please keep writing and don't let the idiots who are so afraid of strong women get you down."

I read the story a second time just to make sure, and damned if I can locate a strong woman in it anywhere. I did notice one nutless wonder, and I couldn't help but notice a cock juggling thundercunt of a whore. Speaking for myself, I've always supposed it takes more strength to do the right things in life, and I marvel at the type of women the commenter must be familiar with in that they think this is an example of a strong woman. Whoever you are, bub, you should really get out more so you could learn what strong people are really like.

Would love my wife to be like this .

I hope you are local to me ,so you put me through this please

I am yorkshire

and pantywaist brit fetish at that. are there no men in all of the United Kingdom?

have a brain fart reversing this fiasco. TK U MLJ LV NV

Smack her in the mouth when you get tired of being submissive. It always works.

Fetish story. The cage is a toy. Get the police to cut it off and arrest the wife. Dumb.