All Comments on 'Is Your Mother Irish?'

Another good story by you.

Boyd

Too much 'fishing detail' - who cares?

And the sentimental fluff was overdone.

A blow-job in his hospital bed? Unlikely!

Stan

Now I do hope you plan a sequel for Bridget's arrival!

reading a journal.. of very boring events in every single detail.. Descriptions can be entertaining.. they don't have to be so accurate or somehow not detailed for the senses.. Not to mention that your characters have no development, this almost reminded me of those fill in the blank stories that little kids write or read in grade three. A writer you're not.. but people seem to like it anyways.. so what do I know :P Hopefully unlike me they can tell your stories apart.

I would love to read more of this beautiful story i would lov to see if Erin and Sean gets married they are so good together please dont stop.

How come you left the wedding out that is the main piece of the story and the ring where you going to include that ?

Pat

The old rule with vaudeville comics was "always leave 'em yelling for more" and you followed it to perfection! The story was great but the ending seemed abrupt, and I had the feeling that another chapter or two would feel just right, or at least a couple more pages. As a reformed boat addict, I appreciated the nautical references. Having the girl bring in a marlin was a nice touch. Another was the poetic flip flop when you tended to her when she was feeling worn out from fighting the fish, and then she cared for you while you were sick.

If you were expanding this into a novelette, it would be interesting to flesh out the mother into a full-blown character, and perhaps one of the brothers. But mind you, I'm not complaining; I loved it!

When you let them jump from hello to happily ever after in 10 minutes lol

Love at first sight happens but not every time heh

A lot of fun and the scenery sounds perfect - except it seemed to be on the Gulf coast not the Atlantic side of Fla which is the best - of course.

and they’re in LUV? Get real.

Luck o'the Irish?