All Comments on 'Isabella Ch. 02'

by masked_maiden

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bad_girl69bad_girl69over 14 years ago
Please dont stop

I know there was about a year between the two chapters. Please, keep writing it asap. Dont have these long gaps. So start writing the 3rd chapter now, and post in another week :) lol

masked_maidenmasked_maidenover 14 years agoAuthor
next chapter soon

I know it took me a long time to post it I tried to post it a month after the other one but due to my poor grammer it was rejected. then I went though about 9 editors before I found one that actualy replyed and edited the story for me. she already has chapter 3 I am planning to be able to put that up in a month or two. Happy readings

jlly16jlly16over 14 years ago
Glad you didn't abandon the story

Thank You, Thank You, Thank You. I have been waiting for you to update. So far so good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Antidote??

Why mention an antidote and then not use it?

masked_maidenmasked_maidenabout 11 years agoAuthor
anonymous antidote

Thank you Anonymous! When the soldier fell he broke the antidote. I thought I had put that in I am sorry I missed it but so did my editors. I will fix that for the book.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Antidote...

I'm pretty sure you did say it broke, I seem to remember something about that, they might have just missed it... Good story though. :)

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