All Comments on 'Isabella Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Antidote...

I'm pretty sure you did say it broke, I seem to remember something about that, they might have just missed it... Good story though. :)

masked_maidenmasked_maidenabout 11 years agoAuthor
anonymous antidote

Thank you Anonymous! When the soldier fell he broke the antidote. I thought I had put that in I am sorry I missed it but so did my editors. I will fix that for the book.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Antidote??

Why mention an antidote and then not use it?

jlly16jlly16over 14 years ago
Glad you didn't abandon the story

Thank You, Thank You, Thank You. I have been waiting for you to update. So far so good.

masked_maidenmasked_maidenover 14 years agoAuthor
next chapter soon

I know it took me a long time to post it I tried to post it a month after the other one but due to my poor grammer it was rejected. then I went though about 9 editors before I found one that actualy replyed and edited the story for me. she already has chapter 3 I am planning to be able to put that up in a month or two. Happy readings

bad_girl69bad_girl69over 14 years ago
Please dont stop

I know there was about a year between the two chapters. Please, keep writing it asap. Dont have these long gaps. So start writing the 3rd chapter now, and post in another week :) lol

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