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Given how close we were to the airport we asked the driver to drop me at the airport curb then take Cindy home via the mechanics. He was happy to ablige given his unexpected show.
As we kissed goodbye, I looked at Cindy. I opened my mouth to speak but she silenced me with her finger.
Cindy looked me in the eye and with the passion of a life long lover said "Les, this was grand. I know it is a lot to digest. I hope to see you soon. If it develops into something, great. If not, can we still be friends?"
I grinned, and pulled her to me. "I love you my friend. Thank you for helping me to move on with my life. Kathy would be proud I finally moved on, and with you."
I turned and ran thru the airport to find my airline, hopeful I could make it on the next flight to Nashville.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 17 years agoPretty good; but needs an ending. Desperately needs a grammarian and spell checker.
sirdave64about 17 years agoA simple tip for writing dialogue is to say it out loud. Does it sound realistic? If it does, it's good, if it doesn't, say it so it does and write that! This story was ruined by dialogue that made the characters seem like they were recent immigrants who could only speak textbook English. I liked the story! People rarely say, "do not", they say "don't" and "I'm" rather than "I am". Get an editor and I think you will rate 5/5 more often
Anonymousover 17 years agoStory is ok, but you really need to get someone to check your prose, it's littered with mistakes.
don87654over 17 years agoLess fantasy and more realism would have made this story much more erotic. I'm hoping that the next chapter will be better.
