All Comments on 'It Begins Ch. 04'

Don't let them rush you. Each first time is precious. There are plenty of wam-bam- thank-you-ma'am stories out there. There are plenty of us that enjoy the slow burn, the simmer. Take your time, just please don't stop!

...lacks realism. At 18, most of us guys wanted anything but to wait. That's what we want in reading this, not neccessarily wham-bam-you-know-what...just REAL progress. Reality. The premise of the story is good, but...

...even an Amish couple would...oh, I'm kidding there, nevermind!

See you @ ch. 37....

Just kidding.

Seriously, I'll see you next year.

You are the author, you decide...

I thought the last chapter could have ended with tentative tastes.

I also think there was more mileage in the fishing trip......

Excellent story..... Looking forward to the next chapter.

Don't be scared of the way your story builds, that's surely the art of a good plot.... Good effort.

I like the pacing a lot. its very well done. i much prefer it to the stories that just jump into the sex without any real story to it. Awesome story, sweet and sexy. looking forward to more very much

I just love how you are telling this story. I can't think of anything I could do to improve the way you are relating this to us. Thank you for the great story.

The pace is perfect. If someone wants a faster pace they should go to the bathroom and imagine their own story with a pace that suits them.

my title says it all, this story is amazing.

I lowered the rating by one point because you're leaning more towards the raw sex side of the story. I enjoy stories that are feeding the love side with sex being the reinforcement of their affection. Even when I was a teenager, I've always found sex alone without the emotional bond to be extremely unfulfilling.

In many ways it is too bad that relationships don't build like this, we are too busy thinking about getting laid and not the emotion that should part of a relationship. Bet there would be fewer divorces and cheating going on.

It aint gonna happen in real life cause we are always in a hurry