All Comments on 'It Happened in the Night Ch. 03'

A very good second chapter although not as good as the first. The formatting was a little messed up though - the first page is all italics.

Thanks for making me aware of the issues with the Italics on page 1. I've submitted changes to fix that and hope it will take effect soon.

Excellent continuation of an intriguing story. Am looking forward to the next chapter.

I can't leave this series alone even though it scares the shit out of me. Like a moth to a flame, buddy... you keep writing and I'll keep reading (with all the lights on in the house). Can't wait to get to the next one!