All Comments on 'It Happened One Rainy Night'

good start....continue please

I loved that very last line! 5 stars!

Nice Work!

I really enjoyed it!

I enjoyed your erotic tale and was curious if there will be more of this stopry to follow <grin (~_~) your a witty and erotic writer that I enjoy reading!

I really liked the erotic situation and how it was played out-would like to see another chapter.

All step mothers need to have this kind of relationship with their step sons.

All step mothers need to have this kind of relationship with their step sons.

love your way of writting. nevertheless it needs more explicit details to make it more raunchy.

needs more but a really good start