All Comments on 'It Has Been A While'

but the holes have no memory. TK U MLJ LV NV

No mate don't hate her more like wishful thinking and see what happens if I continue the story

Oh what a story, or is it? so real so maybe......

Hope that you follow this up soon

I don't think so. First person POV is good for a letter, a poem, a song, but a story that you want other people to read ? Huge turn off! Why? Because half your potential readers may not be able to relate, in this case all the possible male readers.

Gorgeous. I can relate to it. I attended a bar b Q a year or so ago. My ex was there (looking hot) with his new girlfriend (grrrrrrr.....). I would have LOVED to have had a little liaison like the one in this story. Sssiiiigggghhhh. If only.

Allison

Why?

Two main reasons.

1) I cannot stand stories that are so ridiculous as to try to make the reader one of the participants - "I look about and see you have not arrived yet ...) - INSTANT turn off!!

2) Your spelling is very poor and you obviously have no concept of the difference between 'sound alikes' such as "your" and "you're"!!

Get a Proof Reader and an editor and take their advice.

Hey all thanks for the feedback, it is coming in handy and some of which is being put to good use for Part 2. Of course most would realise that I am not Dickens and this is just a bit of fun and hope to improve on. It would be so helpful instead of being rude in your comments and well down right snobby like you are part of some Literotica Elite you actually put a name to your posts. I hope to have Part 2 finished soon and will look at getting an editor to fine tune the process. The stories are written with 2 people in mind; if others enjoy then so be it.

I knew my ex wife would be there,we were friends of the bride and groom.It was 4 years since we parted,she remarried,not me,once is enough.Heather looked nice,a bit plumper,but a dress that showed off the curves,especially her arse which i fucked whenever i got the chance.It was awkward at first but then it was like old times.Her husband,just seemed to drink himself silly,she asked me to dance,i pressed against her,i got hard thinking about her.We sat back down,she asked where i was staying,in the hotel,her hand moved to the front of my trousers,smiled and said want to go to your room.I got up,walked with her out to the lift,the doors closed,my hand went to her breast,hers to the front of my pants.Into the room,she dropped her dress,i got rid of my clothes and pushed her to the bed,she looked at me and said i can get pregnant and she turned around and said it has to be my arse,i know you like it anyway.I went to the bathroom,got some lube,and blobbed it onto my aching cock,then 2 blobs onto her hole,positioned my cock,her hand was already at her pussy as i entered her,my cock sliding into her gloriously warm, tight rectum and just began fucking her,she seemed to sigh,i couldnt help it,my cumm blasted into her,she clenched her arse,yelping as she orgasmed.We collapsed forward,i was still in her,i eased back,no,dont go,i wasnt,i rolled her over,raised her legs a little and looking at her,pushed my cock back into her arse and slowly moved in and out of her.After some time,she started milking my cock with little movements of her arse and i said dont you think we should get back and locking her legs around me said not until you give it to me again.So i leaned back,lifted her legs and began fucking her,faster,she kept moaning and with each deep thrust a small amount of juice spurted out of her pussy,until i really banged her and juice was flowing from her .I pulled out and shot my cumm across her pussy,she said put it in,please put it in and i pushed into her pussy and moved quickly in and out as she orgasmed.I pulled out.We both got up,dressed,back in the lift,she guided my hand to her pussy,no panties and whispered,i dont care,fuck me again.The lift opened,we walked back in,the dancing was still going,she sat so close to me,placed my hand on her pussy under the table and i fingered her to another orgasm.The night ended,i envied her husband,he was going to have a great night but he looked too drunk.