All Comments on 'It Started on the Metro'

and well written, too. this has the potential for a good series.

Excellent start. Looking forward to see how things develop.

Nicely done Kyla_girl, an interesting beginning. I prefer the word teaching vice training, but that is just me.

Your score is pretty good for your first story, just a hint though, the better scoring stories are are usually a couple of pages long at least.

I gave you a 5.

Nice start, I am looking forward to reading the next parts. I have to disagree with a previous reviewer on one comment, I do like the term "training". It should be used if that is indeed what is happening.