All Comments on 'It's Always the Quiet Ones'

A tale of true love amid all the fakery of burlesque. Some might say that the descriptions are baroque and overdone but that's the nature of the setting--the false face that burlesque presents for it's unfulfilled patrons.

I hope we see more from this talented author--and soon.

Excellent story, first or not, but as a first story (here at least) it has the elements that really work well: characters that are of interest in themselves as well as to each other; double surprise: the characters' and ours; erotic intensity; and a well-conceived plot. Nice work. Send us more!

Kink, it's a good hot story. Your over-the-top style makes this story real, paradoxically. First-person is a tough way to tell a story, but you make it work here. Great debut! And of course, if it is worth telling, it's worth quibbling. Quibbles follow, via "Send Feedback".