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Click hereHe sighed out his relief as he returned her smile, "What's that?"
"I'm ready."
His brows furrowing, he hesitated. "Um, that was it. We made love; that was all of it."
She threw her head back and laughed, "No, I mean to your question, earlier. I'm ready. I don't want to wait, there is no one else I want to meet and no experiences I want to have if they aren't with you. I want to marry you and the sooner the better. Do you think Matt is still awake? Can we go tell him now?"
Andy wrapped his arms around her and turned on his side snuggling her in next to him. "Tomorrow will be soon enough, I promise. Why don't we just stay here tonight? Go to sleep for now." He looked down and smiled as he realized she probably hadn't heard anything he had said, her hands were fisted under her chin and her head was resting on his shoulder as she slumbered.
Andy smiled at his future wife as he drifted off to sleep himself.
- COMMENTS
Oleguyover 10 years agoSuch a nice variation on the standard.
As a man, I can't comment on the mental state of an about to be non-virgin girl, but your story took me way back into the realms of antiquity when I murdered my cherry.
Such a moment. Wow.
Fiamma1991over 11 years agoI loved this raw story. In all the other first time stories, the girl always seems to know what to do. It's never awkward. But that is exactly what your first time is supposed to be. A little awkward, a little scary, and very hott. You my friend, definitely got a fave from me. Please don't ever stop writing. This is hands down my most fave story on this site.
Anonymousover 12 years agoI loved your story! So sweet, and so perfect! I was looking for an idealistic escape from reality, and was delighted to stumble upon your story and find just that!
-R. 23, Portland OR
Anonymousover 12 years agoAlthough, did wonder initially if Matt, her stepbrother, would be the one.
However, lovely development of relationship between Sophie and Andy.... xx
Anonymousover 12 years agoThe beginning of your story seems like it started out being a longer, separate chapter, and then the transition to the present day was a little awkward. I think we don't need to know as much about her mother's death and her stepfather. Just a few sentences at the beginning of the present day part of the story would more than fill in any details you seem to think need to be there, regarding both Andy and Matt.
