All Comments on 'It's Just Business'

Jesus dude, thats pathic.

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Title says it all.

I feel sorry for your dog, it shouldn't have to live there either.

crap

hello its like every other story, she cheats he begs to stay and she fucks other guys the only difference is the setting

i just puked...aren't there enough of these stories around, if you are going to write this drivel at least put something into it...i rarely leave negative comments but i just had to here, it was a complete waste of my time

let's forget this one a.s.a.p.

One of the worst. Author just wrote it to irritate readers?

the Ct. Yankee

I liked it, dont listen to the others. I want to hear more.

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...pure crap, so one can only assume that the last comment was sarcasm.

the woman is a beauty of course and hubby is a duffus

Gall to get married. The economic problems are brought on by little dicked men and nig dicked men, Average sized men are ok. Just wimps and bullies...Cut all the little dicks off and whack all the big dicks off and we might a chance

Can you not get any more original than this? Classic worm husband and filthy whore wife story. To write this kind of drivel I must assume you eat your own feces to develop your ideas???

Same as 100 other stores like this. Nothing original at all...

How sick can you get for writing shit like this. Shame on you.

I loved it

Guy, if you wanna have be higher grades, you should post in fetish.Male humiliation, cream pie... not a LW story.

Just a little too short, and it seems a little rushed. Bake must have been double parked when he wrote this. If you judge on the work itself, then I would say that it's not one of the better posts from the author.Thanks

short and rushed, w.t.f. its a story about a pitiful little loser whos afraid of losing a slut he never had. It's shit, it should have never been written, is this what happens when you get old and can't get it up?

Because your posting is such as waste of time

I think you have a good idea, just needs to be fleshed out a little more with details and a slower build up.

Dont be discouraged by all the haters. Keep at it.

Terrible story!!

You are a parasite get loss wimp.

I've heard it said that people should write about what they know. Does that mean the author has an experience like this? If so, the author has my pity...and contempt.

Why so many haters? If you don't like this authors story go read another. Better yet write your own and let the haters critisize you.

There is nothing worse than a story of this nature, and I'll tell you now no male with any balls at all would have something like this under any circomstances it is deflamation to any real male to write something like this guy or woman did!!!! ES&D!!!!

Did this site get so crowded with fags and wimps? They have other sections for this shit, can't you go play your games somewhere else?

HE IS A CUCKOLD WIMP AND LOVING IT. TK U MLJ LV NV

How can a writer honestly be proud of that and submit it for the world to see?

You're better than this...right?

a sniffling spineless cuckold/ TK U MLJ LV NV

And go out and shoot yourself.

Too short and more cruel humiliation needed

just a stupid man and another whore wife

Tell her you'll help her pack. Moronic story

toss the lying bitch to the curb

To the male part of white race. Commercials making fun of white men, blonds with black men in bed on TV, black athlete's with blond models and actresses. Keep writing this bullshit.

Bakeboy is the brown stain on a six year old boy's white underwear.

No Man will like this Story but the Clucks will Love it .

I imagine you sitting in your panties, butt plug in place and after your nail polish dries, you watch videos of the Village People and try putting your mental illness to paper and the rest of us have to suffer for it.

That's quite vile.

Just another whore and stupid wimp story garbage

Cute Story!!!

Why didn't she just put him in a carrier, take him to the vet and have him put down? You wouldn't let a dog or cat live if it were this sick, so why is this wretched creature still alive?

Sorry to hear you were treated like that, must have been quite umanning to find yourself a cuck. Takes real bravery to write about it letting the world know if your own humiliation. Well done.