All Comments on 'It's Just Sex! Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This is really--delightful

(Oh, is that something a "princess" would say?

Fuck you!)

Gay men are, I think, "allowed" to say "delightful" and "lovely." Though a "mere" female, I won't be denied my freedom of language.

But really, this is--sigh, I know I'm--a female-- not allowed to say these words--charming, lovely, lovable ...

Disapproving Rabbit: 'Nuff said. Already--

"uttering weird night-cries and syllables from obscenities.

uttering weird night-cries and syllables from obscenities.

uttering weird night-cries and syllables from obscenities."

Oh. I got carried away.

ravenmxravenmxabout 19 years ago
Great story Cant

Great play on words. I never thought of that when I played.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Fantastic story!

Guy sex is not my thing, but you did an excellent job of drawing me in and keeping me there until the end. Embouchure... I haven't heard that word since high school band! lol

NoJoNoJoabout 19 years ago
Nice one

Great style, and very funny, cantdog!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
"Show me your mouth work..."

Lovely. I smiled through the entire tale and the magical way you wove your words into it.

Awesome job, Cant. Bravo!

impressiveimpressiveabout 19 years ago
Delightful

Thank you, cant! What a fun way to start my day. ~Imp

P.S. For the lazy:

em·bou·chure(äm-boo-shoor)n.

1. The mouth of a river.

2. Music.

The mouthpiece of a woodwind or brass instrument.

The manner in which the lips and tongue are applied to such a mouthpiece.

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