All Comments on 'It's The Way You Look At Me Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Home run again. With football back in the picture potentially, I hope that is not your way of driving the back apart. I don't think i could handle that, they deserve to be together with each other forever. And yes I know it's just a story but I'm totally hooked with the romance and emotion of your characters and writing. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
whoa !! jamie's mom... the missing link ???

Now that the first time you brought Jamie's mom into the picture i am sensing its not all that's behind leaving her.. Is she could be the missing link of the base ? is Jamie he child of sibling love or something ?? watever it is, i am curious to see how it unfolds. it sure adds up spices in the mix. carry on . hoo raaah

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Loving the time difference between the stories

I love how you took the time before to write your story and then submit it all everyday. Not many authors do they on this site so I thank you.

sammers12345sammers12345about 9 years ago
love it

cant wait to read more

shyspudshyspudabout 4 years ago

truly a delight to read this wonderful story, each and every chapter

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