All Comments on 'Ivanovs Ch. 01'

Genrick is hiding things again, he should know from experience that it only causes more problems. I understand him wanting to protect his family but Nicky need to be aware so she isn't caught off guard.

Yeah!!! Looking forward to the new series!

looking forward to reading more

U R OFF 2 A GREAT START. KEEP IT COMING.

Secrets again, silly mam? How can she trust you, and how can she be on guard for the threat. He must know better, given the level of hate and nastiness they are up against. More hard lessons ahead for our hero. And the bitch is poisoning grandpa both emotionally and physically, yes?

just about died from happiness when i realize you continued the story....cant believe gernick is keeping secrets again but i can understand why she just had a baby and she deserves a moment of peace before hell breaks looks.

PART DUEX! HA!!! I am so glad you continued this story. It is old, yet new and has happened in many families. The new bride hates everything you had before her and works to destroy it. Your caught up in your grief and limitations as a life force..., let someone manipulate your grief and you are killing yourself with all this extra negativity. Wow, did I just say all that?! I await your next chapter just like all your other fans. I love Garrick!!! The genuine love he has for his brother is heart warming. They are gonna have to kill Essie, and work out the rest. I wonder what Gregor will do when he has to just deal with himself? Hmmmm. I am so gonna ponder all kinds of scenarios tonight. LOVE IT!!!

This is sooo good! Although, it could use an editor. More please!

But I have to agree with the last comment....for some reason there seems to be many more typos than normally found in your work. You really should look for someone to at the very least proof read your work if not to work as a full editor.

Otherwise, I'm excited to see where this story is going to go!!!

Oh wait, you have the summer off? I guess that means you can write faster! Nice job lady, keep pouring it out there.

there are too many questions about why does everyone hate Gernick ???? Why would anyone follow a senile old fart into war over nothing and to war with the old mans son ?

All this posturing is boring.

I agree ,I am glad you tell what happened with the council . I will keep reading