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"Yeah...what about her?" Jackie asked as she stood there in the door way.
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 11 years ago...this was good, but!
BUT, it's not a great idea to say your character is a writer, then proceed to litter the story with incorrect spelling, punctuation and grammar.
However I shall eagerly await the next installment.
domrogeralmost 11 years agoI hate cliff hangers .That said it has done what you intended and made me eager for the next chapter
Flymaster60almost 11 years agoAnother great start to another great story... GLAD TO HAVE YOU WRITTING AGAIN... love it so fat
digdaddyrichalmost 11 years agoLooks like Jake is going to be busy for a couple of weeks. I have the feeling that Jackie and her girls have been together sexually, and I hope that Jake has history being sexual with his sister too.
It will be sweet to read.
I'll be watching for the next chapter.
Thanks for the read
