All Comments on 'Jack and Diane Ch. 15-18'

Sort of like working out the details of a puzzle once you have seen the general idea... He has set up his revenge quite nicely but I admit I am more into his living well and have not seen any sign of that other than perhaps having a ball with his kids...

Great re-write of the original ending. Where in the original, hero Jack kind of lost steam, this time he is an assertive man, willing to control his destiny. I know that I'm delighted that TTB took the trouble to add this new ending to his delightful "Jack & Diane"

Coupled with that repulsive usage of British slang and mannerism resulted in my skipping most of it.

It seems the writer likes to hear himself talk. Thus dog excrement pathetic effort at writing. Worth "1" !

So Simon is leaving his wife for David. I think Jack ain't far behind....no wonder Diane wanted a real man. Too bad she's such a stupid self centered bitch.

Thanks for the offering.

lol i didnt even catch that david and simon thing i had to read a comment then go back and look for it.. goodone

And I am glad you finally held Peter responsible cheater also

Going very well for Jack.